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Perhaps … When we look back, we can see so many other choices. At the time, didn't it just feel like we were going with the flow? I believe in free will a lot less than I used to.

A wonderfully allusive and powerfully visual poem. I particularly liked the islands disintegrating on the horizon.

S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

KV, lovely friend. Hi. 🫂 It’s good to read you again. I hope you’re doing really well.

“subsiding with the cry of a banshee” : Ending on that parenthetical note is a haunting choice. It suggests that even in "tranquility," there is a lingering, sharp reminder of the myths and ghosts we leave behind. And I love that.

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